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Silent Choir

January 2, 2025 5 Comments

By Tara Flaherty Guy

At the veteran’s hospital, old soldiers wear their lost youth in a fashion ensemble that includes white hair and ball caps emblazoned with their unit names: the 11th Cavalry, the 101st Airborne, the 9th Infantry, the 3rd Marines.

One bent figure, a once-upright soldier who quick-marched, shambles now and stutter-steps.  Gone his lithe grace, like the others…their youthful leap onto tracks and transports, gangplanks and bomber wings, their supple slide down through slender hatches. Liminal places, lost names pronounced in a vanished tongue—Xuân L?c, Bien Hoa, Saigon.

I hear silent songs of sorrow echoing through this temple of loss.

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  1. Nan says

    January 2, 2025 at 8:20 am

    Excellent piece, so much said in so few words.

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  2. Mary says

    January 2, 2025 at 9:48 am

    Captured in such an excellent illustration of showing not telling

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  3. Faith says

    January 8, 2025 at 7:45 am

    Good piece. Very visual and real.

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  4. Shira Musicant says

    January 8, 2025 at 8:46 am

    Where old warriors go to die . . . Tara, I could see these vets in your clear and beautiful writing. The way the memory of their battles lives on. Thank you.

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  5. David Higham says

    January 8, 2025 at 1:35 pm

    You paint a true picture.

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