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Size 10 Success

January 17, 2019 7 Comments

Size 10 Success

By Frank Melling

Christine could hardly wait to tell her best friend Sue about the new shop: proper clothes for real women—not girls with figures like ironing boards.

The shop assistant was lovely—all big, cuddly smiles. The clothes were great—and with sensible styles too. In the changing room, Sue took off her size 14 top and hung it on the wall. The silk, flowery 8 she tried on was a bit tight but the 10 was perfect—honesty at last!

With two dress sizes lost in ten minutes, there was no problem with the celebratory coffee and white chocolate muffin afterwards.

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  1. Pamela says

    January 17, 2019 at 10:53 am

    Haha! Such a great story that speaks to my trick to feeling skinnier ?

    Reply
    • Frank Melling says

      January 17, 2019 at 2:38 pm

      Thank you for your kind comments, Pamela.

      The story came about when we saw a really posh new shop in an exclusive shopping mall using the same sales techniques as I describe in the story. Opposite, was an equally upmarket coffee shop knee deep with cakes.

      My wife, who is also my editor, laughed and said that regardless of the price tag, the temptations were just the same.

      Blokes have an easier time. I just wear a baggy fleece and no-one notices that I am with child!

      Reply
  2. Susan says

    January 17, 2019 at 8:51 pm

    And, once again, shopping is fun. Loved it!

    Reply
  3. Shoshauna Shy says

    January 17, 2019 at 9:05 pm

    Delicious in more ways than one. The “backstory” as good as the flash.

    Reply
    • Frank Melling says

      January 18, 2019 at 8:30 am

      Thanks to everyone for your kind comments. I am so pleased that you have enjoyed this little story.

      Although I have no doubts about my gender, I am absolutely male, I do like writing in the voice of females. It’s a real challenge to see the world through a woman’s eyes and I enjoy it a lot.

      In fact, I have written a complete novel in the voice of a 22 year old woman – and that really did get me thinking! It’s called “Hostie” and is available on Amazon.

      https://www.amazon.co.uk/Hostie-All-Ionian-Rachel-Lamb/dp/0952798751/ref=sr_1_4?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1487095783&sr=1-4&keywords=Hostie

      Thanks again for reading my story.

      Reply
  4. Morgan Baker says

    January 21, 2019 at 1:17 pm

    Fun piece and speaks so honestly of what we (women) deal with

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    • Frank Melling says

      January 22, 2019 at 1:10 pm

      Many thanks Morgan. I am delighted that you enjoyed the story. In this part of life, blokes do have it easier!

      Reply

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