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Sleeping Over

August 7, 2017 6 Comments

Sleeping Over

By Hannah Silvers

When Lucy finally let her daughter have a sleepover, she didn’t refuse when they ordered stuffed crust and double chocolate ice cream. She let them stay up late, forgoing church in the morning to make pancakes.

Katie’s a good girl, Lucy knew. Forget the cost, the inconvenience.

Lucy wouldn’t budge on the sleeping arrangements, of course—boys downstairs on couches, girls upstairs on mattresses. The children didn’t argue.

At her rehearsal dinner, Katie tells the story of her eleventh birthday.

“And thanks, Momma, for my first kiss with this cutie,” Katie says, to laughter, as she smiles down at her bride-to-be.

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  1. Jack Spies says

    August 7, 2017 at 8:14 am

    Oh my. You got me, Hannah. Well done. Well done indeed.

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  2. Meghashri says

    August 7, 2017 at 8:24 am

    Excellent ending!

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  3. Emma says

    August 7, 2017 at 8:54 am

    Totally unexpected ending! Well done!

    Reply
  4. Irene P. Smith says

    August 7, 2017 at 1:31 pm

    I love this! It has a nice twist.

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  5. Ella Syverson says

    August 8, 2017 at 8:48 am

    Love this! It made me smile. 🙂

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    • Sara L. Uckelman (@SaraLUckelman) says

      August 8, 2017 at 9:24 am

      Aww, how sweet!

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