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Slight of Sight

February 13, 2016 4 Comments

Slight of Sight

By Michelle Vongkaysone

My name was Veronica.

My profession accidentally bore me a clone.

Unable to explain myself, I took her in.

She was me, and I, her.

My true image.

Familiarity soon bred contempt.

Her ‘defects’ reflected as my own, the most brutal sort of honesty.

Driven by ire and disgust, I lured her forth.

I felled her right there, a triumph over self.

Even then, I couldn’t feel remorse for it.

Her life was hers, not mine.

Even so, I couldn’t stand it any more.

Her true image was more than I could bear.

And that’s why I’m not Veronica any more.

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  1. Jennifer Freed says

    February 13, 2016 at 9:16 am

    Thought provoking idea. I wonder what her profession was. I wonder if her clone shared her feelings. I thought of the book called Never Le Me Go.

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  2. Bobby Warner says

    February 13, 2016 at 9:31 am

    A nice commentary about how it is often difficult to live with ourselves. “I don’t like who I was, so I’m not that person anymore!” Good job.

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  3. Barry O'Farrell says

    February 13, 2016 at 1:09 pm

    Her profession accidentally bore her a clone…Wow!

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  4. Jeanne Althouse says

    February 13, 2016 at 3:22 pm

    Great story. Thoughts we have all had in an intriguing metaphor.

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