At last, I’m skinny. Like I’ve always dreamed of being. Like an elegant catwalk model.
I spent my whole life trying diets and supplements. But I was always considered ‘plus size.’ Even as a child, I struggled to fit into school uniforms.
I never stopped to wonder why labels from strangers mattered. I simply endured decades of deprivation and self-loathing.
Now my lifelong dream has finally come true. I’m able to eat whatever I want and still lose weight. Though, strangely, I don’t have much appetite.
At last, people say I’m skinny. They also say that’s to be expected with chemotherapy.
Ohhh. This had me to the very end, which was beautiful and heartbreaking at once.
Thank you for these kinds words. They mean a lot to me.
Kudos, PK. This kills me every time I read it.
Thank you, Shoshauna, for your encouragement and for giving me such a terrific Christmas gift!
What a gut-punch with the last word. Well done.
Thank you.
This tiny one is packing heat. The universal theme of “be careful what you wish for” really stings. Beautiful work!
Thank you very much!
So sad-what people say! Well done
Yes, the judgement of some people can be crippling, but I am grateful for yours! Many thanks.
I’ve had special people in my life go through chemo. Your story touched me.
Watched loved ones endure such hardship is painful. I am humbled and honored that this piece spoke to you.
Wonderful. Excellent statement, and moving and real, to me.
Thank you very much.
Wow. Thought provoking.
The ending is powerful, and for me, was unexpected.
Thanks for sharing such a well written story.
Thank you for reading and for your kind words.
Heartbreaking. And a life lesson beautifully told.
Thank you
This is an amazing piece of flash fiction, with a very sad twist in the tail. I hope to read more of the same in the future!