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Smoke and Mirrors

February 22, 2016 5 Comments

Smoke and Mirrors

By Michael D. Brooks

He had been told she was blind. She hadn’t always been, but she was now and she always would be.

But he had his suspicions.

Her blindness was for the greater good, he was told: noble and righteous.

But he had his suspicions.

He plotted and waited to find out if his suspicions were true. He often wondered, “Okay, so she couldn’t see, but she could still hear. How come that wasn’t enough to make things right?” It just didn’t seem fair. When the opportunity arrived, he seized the moment and confirmed his suspicions.

Justice wasn’t blind; her blindfold was transparent.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    February 22, 2016 at 9:01 pm

    Love that surprise ending, Michael! Good story.

    Reply
    • Michael D. Brooks says

      February 23, 2016 at 9:03 am

      Thank you. Glad you liked it.

      Reply
  2. Perry McDaid says

    February 23, 2016 at 1:43 am

    Nice little vignette crafted from political commentary, though I would have gone with translucent rather than transparent. If the latter, we, the public would be able to see the eyes.

    Reply
    • Perry McDaid says

      February 23, 2016 at 1:45 am

      Oops, that should be: If the latter, we – the public – etc..

      Reply
    • Michael D. Brooks says

      February 23, 2016 at 9:06 am

      Perry,

      I very much agree. Translucent is much more appropriate.

      Reply

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