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Smoothing the Way

September 22, 2017 15 Comments

Smoothing the Way

By Susan Gale Wickes

Visits are different now. They live in the same house, but something has changed.

Every time I leave, I take a memento. Once it was an old family photo, one I’d never seen. Another time, a candy jar that used to sit on the kitchen table. How many times I’d lifted the lid of that jar, exploring its contents with child-like wonder.

Now they give me little keepsakes and hugs. Their eyes speak of secrets I don’t want to know. “Someday,” they say.

Someday…

I’ll sit in his chair. I’ll open her music box and bittersweet memories will fill the room.

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  1. James Byrd says

    September 22, 2017 at 2:16 pm

    Poignant. Well done.

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    • Susan says

      September 22, 2017 at 5:09 pm

      Thank you, James.

      Reply
  2. knyte7 says

    September 22, 2017 at 6:43 pm

    Evokes a mood of dread and memories of happier times.

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    • Susan says

      September 22, 2017 at 7:30 pm

      A bittersweet tale….

      Reply
  3. Joy thomas says

    September 23, 2017 at 5:30 am

    I loved this, bittersweet but true.

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    • Susan says

      September 23, 2017 at 11:30 am

      Thanks, Joy.

      Reply
  4. Vivian Satterwhite says

    September 23, 2017 at 11:15 am

    Beautiful. The knowing of what will come . . .

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    • Susan says

      September 23, 2017 at 11:32 am

      And the wishing that it wouldn’t….

      Reply
  5. Caroline says

    September 23, 2017 at 9:46 pm

    This is wonderful Susan. They did smooth the way for me, and my heart is so full of wonderful memories.

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    • Susan says

      September 24, 2017 at 12:23 am

      Thank you, Caroline. Memories can be such beautiful keepsakes.

      Reply
  6. Robert Stratton says

    September 26, 2017 at 10:58 am

    Such a sweet story. You said so much with so few words. I felt like I could picture the scene without any description! That’s a talent! Well done!

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    • Susan says

      September 27, 2017 at 1:43 pm

      Thank you, Robert.

      Reply
  7. Cassie Holmes says

    September 26, 2017 at 5:00 pm

    Beautifully written. I love the detail.

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    • Susan says

      September 27, 2017 at 1:44 pm

      Thanks, Cassie.

      Reply
  8. Anita Bodle says

    October 2, 2017 at 3:53 pm

    So emotional.

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