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March 21, 2016 10 Comments

Snap

By Peter J.

Mandy brushed back her bleached blonde hair. She slanted her tattooed eyebrows. She layered on mascara and thick fake eyelashes, perfecting the clumpy look. She lipsticked and glossed her pouting lips.

This one had to be perfect. They all had to be. Each one was important. They all needed to be special, attention-grabbing. They all competed amongst themselves for the most attention, the same way Mandy used them to compete with others.

She pursed her lips, squinting slightly in what was supposed to be an attractive way.

This was it, she was ready, it was time.

Snap.

Mandy took a selfie.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    March 21, 2016 at 9:30 am

    Great surprise ending, Carinna! Caught me completely unawares. Great job!

    Reply
  2. Carinna Botelho-Howard says

    March 21, 2016 at 10:04 am

    Thank you very much, Bobby!

    Reply
  3. Sue says

    March 21, 2016 at 12:06 pm

    I suppose I should have seen this coming but – not! Very nice, realistically drawn and a total surprise! Nice.

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    • Carinna Botelho Howard says

      March 22, 2016 at 6:42 am

      Thank you very much, Sue!

      Reply
  4. Jimmy says

    March 22, 2016 at 5:52 am

    Very creative, Led me to the conclusion effortlessly.

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    • Carinna Botelho Howard says

      March 22, 2016 at 6:48 am

      Thank you, Jimmy!

      Reply
  5. Smila W. Planete says

    March 22, 2016 at 1:05 pm

    I particularly like the way you have turned the social – cosmetic appeal to others – inward to the self. The idea of making oneself beautiful in order to have that beautiful self look back at you from your photo library is a real social phenomenon. The essential “you” disappears amid all of the more compelling empirical versions of you. I don’t know if it’s a sad reality or not, but it is a reality.
    Once again, Carinna, you have captured an entire world in 101 words.

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    • Carinna says

      March 30, 2016 at 9:32 am

      Thank you as always Smila! We do lose ourselves in what we would like to be, that is certainly true. The more we try to be better, prettier, skinnier- the more we lose of our true selves. Thank you again as always for your insightful praise and comments. 🙂

      Reply
  6. Kerry E.B. Black says

    March 24, 2016 at 6:11 am

    The importance of the selfie. Excellent.

    Reply
    • Carinna Botelho Howard says

      April 15, 2016 at 4:31 pm

      Thanks!

      Reply

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