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Snowflakes

December 3, 2017 11 Comments

Snowflakes

By Glenn Bowman

I bring my mother some hot tea from the small kitchen and smile as I pass a nurse in the carpeted hallway. The ceramic cup adorned with falling white snowflakes is her favorite. I open her door at the hospice center, place her tea on a nightstand, and sit down on the bed. Her failing voice sounds weak.

“Is it snowing outside, John? You know how I love the winter.”

“It’s a blizzard out there, Mom.”

She sips some tea, and closes her eyes, sleeping.

Outside in the shade from the hot summer sun, I sit on a bench and cry.

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  1. Meghashri says

    December 3, 2017 at 10:31 am

    Touching!

    Reply
  2. tskraghu says

    December 3, 2017 at 10:42 am

    A cruel situation I’ve experienced. Thank you.

    Reply
  3. kathy duby says

    December 3, 2017 at 11:48 am

    Lovely moment. I cry with you.

    Reply
  4. Jen HQ says

    December 3, 2017 at 12:11 pm

    Heartbreaking. Great story.

    Reply
  5. Bonnie A. McKeegan says

    December 3, 2017 at 1:03 pm

    Dignity, maintained beautifully!

    Reply
    • James Shaffer says

      December 3, 2017 at 3:29 pm

      Heartfelt. Turning the truth on its head.

      Reply
  6. Vivian Satterwhite says

    December 3, 2017 at 4:22 pm

    Beautiful

    Reply
  7. TTH says

    December 3, 2017 at 5:30 pm

    I love the sensitivity of this writing.

    Reply
  8. Susan says

    December 7, 2017 at 10:31 am

    Beautiful and poignant…..

    Reply
  9. Glenn Bowman says

    December 7, 2017 at 1:05 pm

    My thanks to everyone for your heart felt comments.

    Reply
  10. Louise Edensor says

    December 13, 2017 at 12:50 am

    Just beautiful. Poised and elegant in its telling.

    Reply

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