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Sound Escapes

May 22, 2017 6 Comments

Sound Escapes

By Jack Spies

Loud noises were coming from the apartment upstairs—strong but not alarming.

I settled in to watch my favorite show: the ‘Dandy Danny Hour.’ I love darling Danny and his sly, pithy humor. He is funny.

Halfway through the show, the noise from upstairs had become loud pounding. I increased my volume. I still couldn’t hear Danny, and I had maxed out my amplifier. The pounding was unbearable. I needed my ear near the speaker to hear.

I decided to go up. I turned down my hearing aid, started out the door, and met a large, angry man holding a bat.

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  1. Irene says

    May 22, 2017 at 6:42 am

    Funny story!

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  2. Benita Wiggins says

    May 22, 2017 at 7:36 am

    Keith’s usually the one that suggest alternative endings in the comments, but I couldn’t help but think that it would have been funny if they had both been carrying bats when they met. Thanks for the humor, Jack Spies. — Benita

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  3. Swarn Gill says

    May 22, 2017 at 12:05 pm

    Haha…very good!

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  4. Jack Spies says

    May 22, 2017 at 4:39 pm

    Thank you all for your comments. I’m happy you appreciated the story and got a laugh.

    Benita, thanks for the suggestion to make the story even more batty. I loved it.

    – Jack

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  5. Intrepid Dreamer says

    May 23, 2017 at 12:23 am

    Thanks for the laugh 🙂

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  6. Sanjay Gundlavkar says

    May 26, 2017 at 1:34 pm

    Hello Mr. Jack Spies

    I like your humorous story. Very well explained. Its really nice. I am a writer from Mumbai, India and my mother (tongue) language is Gujarati.

    I need your permission to translate the said touchy story in Indian Local Gujarati Language to put it online at our non commercial blog aksharnaad.com and our free e-magazine with your name as writer. We will also put link back to original link.

    Request your affirmative reply soon.

    Reply

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