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Stained Red

December 10, 2015 12 Comments

Stained Red

By Amanda Saint

He surprised me with a picnic on the beach. We lay on a tartan blanket surrounded by windbreaks. Gulls swooped and screeched overhead, silhouetted against the blue sky. A glorious day.

A badly drawn love heart on the homemade ‘First Anniversary’ card. Strawberries dipped in chocolate. Pink champagne. Our song playing.

Red ants.

A scarlet fever flush rose up his beautiful body until it smothered his swelling face.

Anaphylactic shock, they said. Rare for red ant bites. One in a million.

He was.

My lips were stained blood red from the funeral wine as I scattered his ashes into the sea.

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  1. Christina Butcher says

    December 10, 2015 at 9:43 am

    Great progression of plot, I enjoyed your story

    Reply
    • Amanda Saint (@saintlywriter) says

      December 10, 2015 at 10:02 am

      Thanks Christina ?

      Reply
  2. vickykpointing says

    December 10, 2015 at 12:28 pm

    Great story!

    Reply
    • Amanda Saint (@saintlywriter) says

      December 10, 2015 at 11:45 pm

      Thanks Vicky!

      Reply
  3. Kirsten says

    December 10, 2015 at 1:50 pm

    Beautiful imagery. Beautifully written. Nice work!

    Reply
    • Amanda Saint (@saintlywriter) says

      December 10, 2015 at 11:45 pm

      Thanks Kirsten, you’re very kind 🙂

      Reply
  4. Krystyna Fedosejevs says

    December 10, 2015 at 2:37 pm

    Excellent writing. Colourful and stunning.

    Reply
    • Amanda Saint (@saintlywriter) says

      December 10, 2015 at 11:46 pm

      Thanks Krystyna 🙂

      Reply
  5. Harriet Jones says

    December 12, 2015 at 2:49 pm

    Excellent Mand. You achieve a lot in 101 words. You must feel chuffed.

    Reply
    • Amanda Saint (@saintlywriter) says

      December 13, 2015 at 2:08 am

      Thanks Harriet. I am chuffed 🙂

      Reply
  6. Tony Press says

    December 29, 2015 at 9:24 am

    Good story!

    Reply
  7. bunmioke says

    December 30, 2015 at 2:55 am

    Well crafted piece there, Writer!

    Reply

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