
By Amanda Saint
He surprised me with a picnic on the beach. We lay on a tartan blanket surrounded by windbreaks. Gulls swooped and screeched overhead, silhouetted against the blue sky. A glorious day.
A badly drawn love heart on the homemade ‘First Anniversary’ card. Strawberries dipped in chocolate. Pink champagne. Our song playing.
Red ants.
A scarlet fever flush rose up his beautiful body until it smothered his swelling face.
Anaphylactic shock, they said. Rare for red ant bites. One in a million.
He was.
My lips were stained blood red from the funeral wine as I scattered his ashes into the sea.
Great progression of plot, I enjoyed your story
Thanks Christina ?
Great story!
Thanks Vicky!
Beautiful imagery. Beautifully written. Nice work!
Thanks Kirsten, you’re very kind 🙂
Excellent writing. Colourful and stunning.
Thanks Krystyna 🙂
Excellent Mand. You achieve a lot in 101 words. You must feel chuffed.
Thanks Harriet. I am chuffed 🙂
Good story!
Well crafted piece there, Writer!