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Standing, Thinking, Walking

June 8, 2024 6 Comments

By Eli Daniel Ehrenpreis

I’m walking on a path through the forest preserve on the tail end of a run. It’s late winter, 40°, a perfect day.

A powerful buck stands on the path in front of me. I think about what I’ve been told to do in these situations. Never turn and run? Avoid eye contact?

“You should be afraid of me.”

So, I decide to stand still.

One of those cyclists in designer athletic gear speeds past me. The buck stays in position and then knocks the rider to the ground. The three of us walk slowly in opposite directions.

A perfect day.

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  1. Lance A. says

    June 8, 2024 at 2:33 pm

    #sharetheroad

    Reply
    • HelenZ says

      June 12, 2024 at 8:06 am

      Ha ha!
      Nature has priority.

      Reply
      • Eli Daniel Ehrenpreis says

        June 14, 2024 at 10:58 am

        Hello
        Thank you. Glad you found meaning in the story!

        Reply
    • Haley says

      June 12, 2024 at 10:40 am

      Great capture of a moment of awe – we love to witness these creatures but they also remind us how powerful they are.

      Reply
      • Eli Daniel Ehrenpreis says

        June 14, 2024 at 10:59 am

        Thank you, Haley. I am glad this story resonates with you!
        EDE

        Reply
    • Eli Daniel Ehrenpreis says

      June 14, 2024 at 10:57 am

      Thank you very much!
      EDE

      Reply

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