Win Cash Prizes & Get Professional Feedback @ Flash Fiction Magazine
Learn More
  • Skip to primary navigation
  • Skip to main content
  • Skip to primary sidebar

101 Words

101 Word Short Stories

  • Subscribe
  • About
  • Submissions
  • Volunteer

Star-filled

October 14, 2015 3 Comments

Star-filled

By John C. Mannone

After Robert Frost

He always wanted a telescope, so he spent all his insurance money. The farm burned down, perhaps from that lightning storm last month; spooked the cows in the barn, knocking over the kerosene lamp, he said.

On a tripod, he mounts the telescope tube fashioned from well-machined brass. It glints under stardust and tabernacles a silvered mirror crafted from porthole glass ground smooth with fine grit.

In the eyepiece, a crescent moon gold-leafs the sky and fire-stars glitter the night like gold dust. He chooses stars as his legacy.

As the telescope sifts the heavens, his eyes sparkle.

Share this:

  • Share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook
  • Share on Threads (Opens in new window) Threads
  • Share on Bluesky (Opens in new window) Bluesky
  • Share on X (Opens in new window) X
  • Email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email
  • More
  • Share on Tumblr (Opens in new window) Tumblr
  • Print (Opens in new window) Print
  • Share on Telegram (Opens in new window) Telegram
  • Share on Mastodon (Opens in new window) Mastodon
  • Share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window) WhatsApp
  • Share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit
  • Share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window) LinkedIn
  • Share on Nextdoor (Opens in new window) Nextdoor
  • Share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest

The Power of Imagery with Nina Schuyler

September 12 & 13 on Zoom
Enrollment closes Thursday, September 3 at 7:00 PM Pacific

If your descriptions are vivid but your stories still feel thin, this workshop is for you.

Join award-winning author Nina Schuyler to learn the difference between description, which tells a reader what things look like, and imagery, which carries plot, character, and meaning at the same time.

In just two days, you'll learn to choose images that hold emotion without naming it, pair them so each one deepens the other, and build patterns that gather meaning as the story moves.

Learn More and Enroll

Reader Interactions

Comments

  1. John C. Mannone says

    October 14, 2015 at 11:14 am

    For those who are curious, the Robert Frost reference eclipses two of his poems:
    “Star-splitter” (http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/173537) and
    “Choose Something Like a Star” (http://writersalmanac.publicradio.org/index.php?date=2014/09/12)

    John C. Mannone

    Reply
  2. Lisa SB says

    October 14, 2015 at 11:18 am

    Hi John,

    I very much enjoyed this story. Good work!

    Reply
    • John C. Mannone says

      October 15, 2015 at 10:52 am

      Thank you, Lisa. I am glad you enjoyed it. In case you and others might be interested, the Robert Frost reference in the epigraph involves two of his poems. The primary one is “Star-splitter,” but also “Choose Something Like a Star” in a more subtle way. JCM

      Reply

Leave a Reply Cancel reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

Primary Sidebar

Search Stories

The end.