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Still Brothers?

April 8, 2022 8 Comments

By G. Kroker

He crested the ridge and saw the cabin. They had agreed, when the nightmare was over, to meet back here. They had been mere boys then, looking forward to adventure.

His blue uniform matched his eye color. He dismounted, went to the door, knocked with his one remaining hand. His heart pounded as if he was going to enter battle again. Then slowly the door opened. There was his brother, unsteady on crutches. His gaunt face registered a weary smile. Grey eyes searched blue eyes.

“Appomattox,” he whispered.

“The savaging ended,” whispered the other, stepping forward.

They leaned upon one another.

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  1. Scott Brian Blanke says

    April 10, 2022 at 9:34 pm

    Excellent

    Reply
  2. Chiehyun says

    April 11, 2022 at 2:50 pm

    I like the idea of unending fight between siblings, spiced up by a taste of adults’ brutality.

    Reply
  3. HelenZ says

    April 13, 2022 at 7:15 am

    Wonderful – I’m glad they made it back to on another.

    Reply
    • George kroker says

      April 15, 2022 at 7:15 pm

      Thank you so muc Helen!

      Reply
  4. Ekta Garg says

    April 14, 2022 at 1:07 pm

    Brilliant! Such an amazing story told in so few words and so true of Civil War times. Wonderfully done!

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    • George kroker says

      April 15, 2022 at 6:57 pm

      Thank you Ekta!

      Reply
  5. Connie Jeffords says

    April 17, 2022 at 10:25 pm

    Makes me want to read much more !!

    Reply
  6. Robert Freedland says

    April 17, 2022 at 10:38 pm

    Well done George!

    Reply

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