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Still No Bunting

February 11, 2021 4 Comments

By Andy Vale

In Yorkshire, four triangular cheese and pickle sandwiches were laid on a gingham tablecloth as Europe celebrated Hitler’s defeat. In Burma, the war wasn’t over.

“I’ll cover your post, Petty,” Cope piped up. “Pass him a comb. Lord knows when a posh medic might visit us again.” A light chuckle rippled through their fellow gunners.

That morning, Cope took Petty’s spot to continue the push on the retreating Japanese. But as the 7.2-inch howitzer backfired, Cope’s service was cut short.

Petty returned later to discover a leg up in a tree and nothing else.

In Burma, the war still wasn’t over.

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  1. David Daniel says

    February 11, 2021 at 7:59 am

    You’ve a fine eye for precise detail.

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  2. I.R.Pathak says

    February 11, 2021 at 12:24 pm

    Vivid description.

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  3. Derek says

    February 11, 2021 at 1:21 pm

    I like the contrast in this story. It is very good.

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  4. Liz says

    February 13, 2021 at 11:30 am

    I think this story wants to be longer, tbh – it’s more of a teaser than a tale 🙂

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