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Still Right Here

October 15, 2022 17 Comments

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I was the second of three to be born; the only winter baby. Her guinea pig, always on hand for taste-testing new recipes before family dinners. The last to remain at home while the eldest and youngest found marriage and families of their own. Hockey nights in Canada shared over a bowl of popcorn, duets in the kitchen to a crooning Conway Twitty, and giggle-filled movie nights.

Twenty-three of 29 years spent under the same roof while her other sons could hardly be bothered to come home. And still when the dementia stole her moments, mine was the first name forgotten.

By Max Girard

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  1. Mary A Gorman says

    October 15, 2022 at 7:16 am

    Ah, indeed great story resonates with me. Keep on writing

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  2. Vivian says

    October 15, 2022 at 7:41 am

    I can feel his sadness…

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  3. Meghashri Dalvi says

    October 15, 2022 at 7:49 am

    Poignant.

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  4. Howard Dart Humeston says

    October 15, 2022 at 8:03 am

    Sad but well written and poignant story. Good work.

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  5. Coco says

    October 15, 2022 at 8:38 am

    Touching.
    Nicely done!

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  6. Karen Tucker says

    October 15, 2022 at 9:16 am

    Heartbreaking!

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  7. Derek says

    October 15, 2022 at 11:06 am

    This will resonate with anyone who has lost loved ones to dementia.

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  8. JK Hayward-Trout says

    October 15, 2022 at 12:54 pm

    Rings true. It is so sad.

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  9. verna vennell says

    October 15, 2022 at 12:58 pm

    keep writing , brings back memories

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  10. Mona B. says

    October 15, 2022 at 1:10 pm

    A writer’s job is to capture the Reader, stir emotion and create a dialogue…Job well done!

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  11. James Robert says

    October 15, 2022 at 2:21 pm

    Poignant and powerful. I enjoyed this!

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  12. Valli Henry-Boldini says

    October 15, 2022 at 3:52 pm

    Chapeau…

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  13. Greta says

    October 15, 2022 at 4:45 pm

    This is beautiful, and the title helps ground it as well.

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  14. Nina says

    October 16, 2022 at 8:46 pm

    Excellent and so bittersweet. Well Done!

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  15. Caroline says

    October 19, 2022 at 7:12 am

    Really poignant

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  16. Ekta Garg says

    October 19, 2022 at 10:31 am

    Beautiful and heartbreaking all at the same time. Well done!

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  17. Bud says

    October 19, 2022 at 11:40 am

    Wow… such a powerful story!

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