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Storm Season

September 16, 2016 7 Comments

Storm Season

By Trevor Pyle

Every year there were legends about things whisked away by the wind. A stop sign found planted, crooked and jaunty, in the middle of a pasture. A trailer deposited across the street, occupants peering ashen-faced from the window.

One morning I tried to bike home before the storm; my breath bottled tight in my chest, the sky the color of a gun barrel.

Thunder rolled across the field. My blood felt wild and electric. My pulse throbbed. I fell to my knees, hands clapped over my ears.

I felt only joy. Joy. Wondering if I would land in a new world.

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  1. Carrick says

    September 16, 2016 at 11:17 am

    “Somewhere over the Rainbow”…………………the sequel..?

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  2. Chris Case says

    September 16, 2016 at 2:32 pm

    I could feel the storm and the terror that goes with it. Well done.

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  3. sueannporter1 says

    September 16, 2016 at 5:45 pm

    Great descriptions of the incoming storm, with a shift to optimism at the end.

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  4. Thomas Minder says

    September 17, 2016 at 9:55 am

    Good story, good description. Unexpected yet interesting ending

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  5. Bobby Warner says

    September 17, 2016 at 10:14 am

    A nice, highly visual fantasy–or is it? (A fantasy, that is.) Enjoyed this.

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  6. Andy says

    September 21, 2016 at 3:46 am

    Nice work Trevor. I really enjoyed this!

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  7. Nataliia Totka says

    October 6, 2016 at 12:51 pm

    nicely done

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