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Strangers

August 28, 2022 18 Comments

By Olive St. John

Your eyes catch mine on the subway, sending a bolt of recognition through me.

Six months ago, you and I were walking down the same street when a screaming, wide-eyed woman ran toward us. A truck chased in close pursuit. Looking at each other, we silently indicated that neither of us wanted to get involved. Neither of us did. In three blinks, the woman was thrashing, shrieking, being dragged by two men. Then the noise and mess drove away. Without a word, we each carried on with our days.

Now we sit on the subway, pretending not to notice one another.

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  1. Meghashri Dalvi says

    August 28, 2022 at 7:03 am

    Stunning!

    Reply
    • Olive St. John says

      August 28, 2022 at 9:16 am

      thank you!

      Reply
  2. Kevin says

    August 28, 2022 at 7:05 am

    Excellent.

    Reply
    • Olive St. John says

      August 28, 2022 at 9:16 am

      thank you, Kevin!

      Reply
  3. MDP says

    August 28, 2022 at 8:53 am

    ooh this hits my nerves

    Reply
    • Olive St. John says

      August 28, 2022 at 9:20 am

      haha I’m glad!

      Reply
  4. Cheryl says

    August 28, 2022 at 9:30 am

    Thanks Olive,
    This really moved me, it is thought provoking and dramatic
    Enjoyed it!!!

    Reply
  5. JL says

    August 28, 2022 at 9:35 am

    So true

    Reply
  6. Yolanda Joosten says

    August 28, 2022 at 10:21 am

    Very unexpected and beautifully written!

    Reply
    • Olive St. John says

      August 28, 2022 at 10:39 am

      thank you very much Yolanda!

      Reply
  7. Corey says

    August 28, 2022 at 10:51 am

    Sounds like everyday life. Good read

    Reply
  8. Vivian says

    August 28, 2022 at 12:01 pm

    Wow!

    Reply
    • Olive St. John says

      August 28, 2022 at 3:01 pm

      thanks Vivian!

      Reply
  9. yogita says

    August 29, 2022 at 4:11 am

    Loved it
    Dramatic. Sad.
    But that’s life in 101 words 🙂

    Reply
  10. Lon Richardson says

    August 31, 2022 at 1:59 pm

    This is actually quite poetic…

    Reply
  11. Miruna says

    August 31, 2022 at 4:18 pm

    Very good.

    Reply
  12. Doug Jacquier says

    August 31, 2022 at 11:56 pm

    Society in microcosm in 100 words. Well done.

    Reply
  13. Sheri says

    September 2, 2022 at 10:13 pm

    Oh, excellent.

    Reply

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