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Subtext

March 2, 2016 5 Comments

Subtext

By Don Tassone

She had not heard from her friend in a long time.  She had forgotten about her text message.  She had deleted it, giving up on any response.

Then one evening, she felt her phone vibrate.

‘Hi.’

It was from him.  It took her breath away.  She collapsed on the sofa, her hands trembling, and stared at the screen.  Could this be happening?  Was a reconnection even possible?  Dare she respond?

She took a leap and typed, ‘How are you?’

‘Good.’

‘I miss you so much.’

‘I am here.’

‘Where?’

‘Right beside you.  All around you.’

‘Your funeral was beautiful.’

‘I know.’

 

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Comments

  1. Bobby Warner says

    March 2, 2016 at 9:59 am

    Another hard-hitting surprise ending. Loved this one!

    Reply
  2. Laura Lovic-Lindsay says

    March 2, 2016 at 10:07 am

    Oh, very nice reveal.

    Reply
  3. dontassone says

    March 2, 2016 at 6:56 pm

    Thanks to all. I’m glad you like this story.

    Reply
  4. jlcourtney says

    March 2, 2016 at 5:09 pm

    Fantastic read!

    Reply
  5. Lisa M. Scuderi-Burkimsher says

    March 2, 2016 at 6:25 pm

    Great hook in and surprise ending. I wasn’t expecting that. Nice work.

    Reply

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