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Subway

March 2, 2016 7 Comments

Subway

By Prospero Dae

They say this subway line has trains to the major galaxies.

Here’s an express train now. The DeLorean-like hatch opens, and I take a few mincing steps forward. This train is going to Andromeda. All aboard! (There’s only me.)

The ride is smooth, and after a time, I no longer feel like vomiting. The ringing in my ears has stopped.

The LED screen, next to the public access defibrillator, displays speed and distance in sci-fi green. I whip out my abacus to make the calculation.

Four hundred and twenty-seven years to Andromeda—I’ll be dust by then! This service is doomed.

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  1. Cynthia Jobin says

    March 2, 2016 at 9:24 am

    Your tell-tale abacus tells me you might be the real fictional Prospero, clone of Shakespeare’s creation, until now living as a magician in exile with Ariel on a tropical island, which means you are already 406 years old. What’s another 427?

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  2. Bruce Goodman says

    March 2, 2016 at 9:13 am

    You should’ve gone there in the other direction. Let’s hope you learn from this.

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  3. Bobby Warner says

    March 2, 2016 at 9:54 am

    An amusing science fiction horror story, Prospero. Just my kind of story! Great job!

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  4. Susanne says

    March 2, 2016 at 2:22 pm

    I hope he only paid for a one way ticket. Good story, Prospero. How do you come up with your ideas?

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  5. Barry O'Farrell says

    March 2, 2016 at 2:52 pm

    I like the mix of all materials hi-tech plus the ever reliable abacus.It’s a good, human touch.

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  6. Lisa M. Scuderi-Burkimsher says

    March 2, 2016 at 6:21 pm

    A nice sci-fi micro with a twist ending. Good work.

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  7. Mary says

    March 4, 2016 at 12:25 pm

    From here to eternity! Had no idea which direction this was going on from the title, my imagination wasn’t even close. Loved it!

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