By Ashley Leatch
I saw a woman that I knew on the news tonight. We went to school together. She was school captain, a straight-A student, always destined for great things. She was unanimously voted “most likely to win a Nobel prize”—science, literature, peace, it could have been any, all.
The last I heard she was accepted, first intake, into a 1% success rate medical course. It was no surprise, then, to see her on the television.
After three consecutive nightshifts she was as dangerous behind the wheel as a drunk. Two fatalities: a man I recognised and a young girl I didn’t.
A chilling story of the price of ‘success’. Nice job!
A familiar tale with an unexpected result.
Really, a medical success turned medical disaster.
Well done!
My goodness!
Your dedication to the world and the lore is genuinely inspiring. Every detail feels intentional and adds to the richness of the environment. I feel like I could spend hours just exploring the setting you’ve built. I want to give a huge shout-out for the brilliant chapter you just released! It was everything I hoped for and more. You have a real talent for storytelling. Bravo!
Perfectly coherent and a full, chilling story.
This makes me feel a bit better about not being so perfect.