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Sucker Punch

July 2, 2015 6 Comments

Sucker Punch

By Bunmi Oke

“Oh, now that’s your ‘date’? Phew! Someone old enough to be your father!”

”It’s not what you think, Honey. Just hear me out…,” blocking the restaurant’s entrance.

I’m heedless. My next actions seem fast-forward, while my thinking is slow motion.

My clenched fist raised and going all street fight style, I ignore whatever tries to remind me that patience is the fruit of the Spirit. Approaching from behind, I disregard the Voice of restraint, until a sucker punch on his temple clears the eyes. My eyes.

But not soon enough for my girlfriend’s “That’s my Dad!” to be of any use.

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  1. TISA GARRISON says

    July 2, 2015 at 3:50 pm

    Yes…Amen, Sister Bunmi Okii…Even Western girls have to endure this grotesque reality about their father-units…

    Reply
    • bunmioke says

      July 2, 2015 at 11:55 pm

      Oh well, don’t they? Thanks for the comment.

      Reply
  2. TISA GARRISON says

    July 2, 2015 at 7:32 pm

    Or. Brother, Bunmi…

    Reply
    • bunmioke says

      July 2, 2015 at 11:58 pm

      *smiles* It’s all right.

      Reply
  3. Deborah dawodu says

    July 3, 2015 at 12:55 am

    End of Relationship or whatever

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    • bunmioke says

      July 3, 2015 at 2:04 am

      Certainly. Hahaha.
      Thanks for the time.

      Reply

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