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Sunday Morning

June 1, 2017 3 Comments

By Grace Piper

“Let us pray,” says the…priest? Preacher? Father? Leanne is new here, so she has never been sure of the terminology.

She closes her eyes and ducks her head, relieved no one can hear her thoughts.

Okay, God, let’s do this…I am out of vegetable oil…no, this is not the time. Pray, Leanne.

She peeks one eye open, hoping she won’t be noticed. And she isn’t. Everyone is either good at faking it, or they’re really connecting. They make it look so easy.

Bzz. Her phone vibrates. In the spirit of mindfulness, communion, etc., she ignores it. She tries again to pray.

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  1. Ariffa says

    June 1, 2017 at 7:18 am

    Very relatable character and scenario. We’ll done, Grace!

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  2. b. says

    June 1, 2017 at 10:00 am

    Thank you Grace, I like the way you led me connect to the Lord then showed me how to disconnect from the world of electronics.

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  3. Jerry Kamens says

    June 1, 2017 at 12:27 pm

    As her phone vibrates, ringer off in consideration of other supplicants, so may her heart vibrate as well!

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    Intimacy is what we crave; it is also what we fear most. – Radical Hospitality

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