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Sunrise

June 11, 2018 10 Comments

Sunrise

By Meghashri Dalvi

Sara stumbled on the steep road; John quickly steadied her. Reaching the hilltop slightly later than usual, they found their favorite spot. Birds whistled nearby as the dazzling disc rose slowly against the red east, bathing everything in bright light.

“The sunrise will be blue there, right?” Sara tried sounding casual, but her hands clenched the old wooden seat.

“Yeah, and the sun will be whitish…smallish.”

“Right! But we’ll get used to it, won’t we?” She turned to meet his eyes, leaning closer.

They sat quietly, savoring their last sunrise from Earth, before the upcoming one way trip to Mars.

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  1. rauthor68 says

    June 11, 2018 at 11:06 am

    Well done, and savoring a view to be remembered when surveying the red planet.

    Reply
    • Meghashri says

      June 12, 2018 at 12:23 pm

      Thank you very much!

      Reply
  2. D.V.Kulkarni says

    June 11, 2018 at 12:58 pm

    Nice.Touching

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    • Meghashri says

      June 12, 2018 at 12:23 pm

      Thanks Sir!

      Reply
  3. glkamens says

    June 11, 2018 at 1:55 pm

    Truly transcendent. Jerry

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    • Meghashri says

      June 12, 2018 at 12:23 pm

      Thanks!

      Reply
  4. Heather says

    June 13, 2018 at 9:59 am

    Well written. Love, trepidation, and adventure.

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    • Meghashri says

      June 14, 2018 at 9:52 pm

      Thank you!

      Reply
  5. Prabhu says

    June 13, 2018 at 12:04 pm

    Although it’s the same sun, nothing like the one at home, is there?

    Reply
    • Meghashri says

      June 14, 2018 at 9:57 pm

      Absolutely!

      Reply

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