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Super Lemon Boy

May 1, 2022 10 Comments

By Jennifer Lai

I place the Super Lemon candy on my tongue. Immediately, my lips pucker, eyes squint, and hands flap wildly in the air. “Too sour!”

While other fourth graders laugh, Conner holds out his palm. “Gimme.”

I spit the candy into his hand and watch him pound his fist in the air like a judge pounding a gavel, his lips sucking inward.

Our classmates start counting.

At “Mississippi 20,” Conner’s face relaxes. He spits out the candy and hands it back to me, smiling. “All good now.”

I pop it in my mouth and chew. The center is sweet. Just like Conner.

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Comments

  1. David says

    May 1, 2022 at 5:13 am

    And just like this story. Nice one.

    Reply
  2. Helen C says

    May 1, 2022 at 7:09 am

    Good story and very sweet

    Reply
  3. Khadija Rashid says

    May 1, 2022 at 7:38 am

    sour from the outside, sweet on the inside! good one

    Reply
  4. Scott Brian Blanke says

    May 1, 2022 at 12:24 pm

    A gross, but very sweet story.

    Reply
  5. albert Norman katz says

    May 1, 2022 at 3:06 pm

    loved it!

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  6. Jennifer Lai says

    May 1, 2022 at 6:00 pm

    Thank you everyone for reading and commenting! 🙂

    Reply
  7. Nina says

    May 2, 2022 at 12:56 pm

    Super sweet story!! ?

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    • Nina says

      May 2, 2022 at 12:58 pm

      That was supposed to be an emoji, not “?” lol.

      Reply
  8. dlherrmann says

    May 4, 2022 at 12:28 pm

    My son drank concentrated lemon juice straight from the bottle. No WAY!!!

    Reply
  9. Tina says

    May 4, 2022 at 10:37 pm

    I could just imagine little kids doing that.

    Reply

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