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May 29, 2023 6 Comments

By Efy Halperin

Ten-year-old Ibrahim was admitted to the Kiboga district hospital in critical condition due to cerebral malaria. We patiently treated him with Artesunate around the clock and hoped for the best. Happily, within a few days, he regained consciousness and started to walk and a week later was discharged home with minimal neurologic damage.

Today, little Ibrahim came to our clinic with his grandmother and handed us a live rooster as a ‘thank you’ gift. All of us were very moved, but soon thereafter realized we now have a big problem: What in the world are we going to do with it?

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  1. Yolanda Joosten says

    May 29, 2023 at 7:31 am

    A good story with a happy ending and a fun twist!

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  2. David says

    May 29, 2023 at 3:01 pm

    Made me smile. Thank you.

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  3. Paulene says

    May 31, 2023 at 7:09 am

    Made me smile too. Lovely story.

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  4. Bud says

    May 31, 2023 at 8:35 am

    Very enjoyable story.

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  5. Paul Scott Wood says

    May 31, 2023 at 9:49 am

    To show appreciation, in some cultures, a gift like a live rooster would be common. In this country most people wouldn’t even send a thank you note.

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  6. Efy says

    June 1, 2023 at 11:44 am

    Thank you Yolanda, David, Paulene, Bud & Paul for your encouraging comments

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