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Suspicious

September 20, 2018 7 Comments

Suspicious

By Fred Vogel

When the frozen carcass of Nathanial Higgins was discovered at the bottom of the ravine, his children readily admitted to rolling their deceased father’s body over the cliff and down the hillside just as the latest snow storm of the century was about to hit. They reasoned that since they could not afford a proper burial, their father would find eternal peace in the nature he so dearly loved. But as the children were being released into their aunt’s care, Sheriff John Willard couldn’t help but think back two years ago, when their mother had perished in that suspicious barn fire.

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  1. jj gehring says

    September 20, 2018 at 7:31 am

    Nice, quick, hard-hitting tale … well played, sir!

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  2. cascondaville says

    September 20, 2018 at 8:26 am

    Love a story that makes one wonder! Nice job!

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  3. Brian says

    September 20, 2018 at 9:16 pm

    I love this one.

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  4. Susan says

    September 21, 2018 at 5:44 pm

    Great story!

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  5. marlenesamuels says

    September 21, 2018 at 9:40 pm

    Brilliant! Love the kick-in-the-pants ending.

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  6. Shoshauna Shy says

    September 22, 2018 at 11:28 am

    Whoa, Nelly! Yikes!

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  7. Susan says

    September 30, 2018 at 12:13 pm

    Good ending.

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