By Robb Lanum
“Anybody can be a wedding photographer,” Tony scoffed. “Everyone’s dressed up, eager to pose, do the chicken dance… Now, a divorce photographer… That would require talent.”
Becky had never thought about it like that. But she nodded like she had.
“I bet you’ve never thought about it like that, huh?”
“Sure I have,” Becky said. Then, “How many girls would you marry just to keep a steady clientele?”
Tony grinned. Becky tried not to smile. He fondled his camera. Or maybe she did.
“I bet you’d like to take my picture right now,” she dared him.
“Nah,” Tony said. “Not yet.”
Clever. I love the interplay between Tony and Becky. You get a real feel for their personalities and relationship. I can feel her insecurity and his playful teasing.
Divorce photographer makes a great premise and could reward expansion.
Some people celebrate divorce being final with a party. Robb, your divorce photographer idea is timely. The final two words, “Not yet,” wraps up your story, offers an omen, and reveals that sleazy side of Tony.