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Teamwork

June 8, 2016 4 Comments

Teamwork

By William Gilmer

It had been days since the ill-fated Happy Jungle Excursions survivors had eaten.

“Red snakes are edible right?”

“No, Blues are safe, Reds are poisonous.”

“You mean venomous.”

“Same thing, like flammable and inflammable.”

“No, venomous means they have to bite you and poisonous means you have to bite them.”

“Whatever.”

“Only Blue for you, Red is dead. Remember?”

“Isn’t it No Blue for you, eat Red instead?”

Annoyed, the snaked reared up and sunk his fangs into the nearest leg, the owner of which collapsed, yelling in ear splitting agony before dying.

In teamwork, the survivors realized, results outweigh discussion.

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Comments

  1. b. says

    June 8, 2016 at 9:18 am

    Great setup, great delivery and the message in the last line… Magnificent. I like the way you think and the way your writing delivers your message.

    Reply
    • William Gilmer says

      June 8, 2016 at 10:02 am

      Thank you!

      Reply
  2. Bobby Warner says

    June 8, 2016 at 9:05 pm

    Good story…but what I want to know is: What happened to the snake? Was it eaten? Did it get away? Did it join the band of survivors!?

    Reply
  3. Luann says

    June 10, 2016 at 1:44 pm

    LOL… great fun story

    Reply

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