Today was the day. The day she never thought would come. She looked at her veiled face in the mirror, and her eyes began to fill with tears.
Just as she was about to get cold feet, the car arrived. She was scared, unsure if she could do it.
Staring upon the church, she knew it was filled with loved ones, flowers, and a new chapter. She walked down the aisle and stood looking down at her husband, thinking about her future. Or at least, what she thought would be her future. Then the funeral began.
“James Harry Tarnum was born…”
So sad – I could feel her pain. Well done!
So beautifully written and made me shed a tear!
Well done!
What a rollercoaster in such a short piece! Very well done!
Wow! Great writer!
I like the pacing and the structure’s excellent, lovely twist. Well done.
Excellent, riveting and well written.
Sensuous words effectively depict the image. Background, development, climax and end are set in perfect order. Well done, Donald.
Great twist.
How can 101 words have a surprise ending? So well done.
Great read… I followed her emotions to the twist ending where I felt her pain .. well done … kudos …
A brave write with an unexpected twist. Well done.