Win Cash Prizes & Get Professional Feedback @ Flash Fiction Magazine
Learn More
  • Skip to primary navigation
  • Skip to main content
  • Skip to primary sidebar

101 Words

101 Word Short Stories

  • Subscribe
  • About
  • Submissions
  • Volunteer

Temptation

May 2, 2023 2 Comments

By L L Darroch

“I want to live where syrup pours from the trees, where honey drips overflowing from the beehive, where grapes are always juicy and full on the vines, and where the water runs crystal clear and free in the river.” Adam scrunched up his face and massaged his brow. When he’d asked what she wanted in their new home, he’d been thinking ‘near a river,’ or ‘plenty of shade.’

They rested on a rock at the edge of a barren desert. He squeezed her hand tight. “But please stop bringing home every wandering stray. Or asking any more of them for advice.”

Share this:

  • Share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook
  • Share on Threads (Opens in new window) Threads
  • Share on Bluesky (Opens in new window) Bluesky
  • Share on X (Opens in new window) X
  • Email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email
  • More
  • Share on Tumblr (Opens in new window) Tumblr
  • Print (Opens in new window) Print
  • Share on Telegram (Opens in new window) Telegram
  • Share on Mastodon (Opens in new window) Mastodon
  • Share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window) WhatsApp
  • Share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit
  • Share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window) LinkedIn
  • Share on Nextdoor (Opens in new window) Nextdoor
  • Share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest

The Power of Imagery with Nina Schuyler

September 12 & 13 on Zoom
Enrollment closes Thursday, September 3 at 7:00 PM Pacific

If your descriptions are vivid but your stories still feel thin, this workshop is for you.

Join award-winning author Nina Schuyler to learn the difference between description, which tells a reader what things look like, and imagery, which carries plot, character, and meaning at the same time.

In just two days, you'll learn to choose images that hold emotion without naming it, pair them so each one deepens the other, and build patterns that gather meaning as the story moves.

Learn More and Enroll

Reader Interactions

Comments

  1. Cathryn says

    May 2, 2023 at 1:34 pm

    Hello LL,
    Very subtle.
    Of course, Adam didn’t have a clue as to his mirror-opposite “help meet’s” maternal characteristics and instincts.
    Kudos on creativity and writing prowess.

    Reply
  2. Sandra says

    May 3, 2023 at 7:07 pm

    Adam asked and she delivered. Love, love. Thank you.

    Reply

Leave a Reply Cancel reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

Primary Sidebar

Search Stories

The end.