By P. Leppanen
She’d never cheated in her life, not even in elementary school. She prided herself on being faithful, until last night. The entire drive there, she thought about how sleazy she felt, how cheap. It had been so long, though, and when she saw the newspaper advertisement, she couldn’t control herself anymore.
When she got there, she stayed in a corner, ruminating over the decision that would change her life. A young man approached her, and she whispered what she wanted.
Finally, when she gathered her courage, she picked it up and took a large bite from a succulently greasy double cheeseburger.
Great twist! Also, this is totally my quarantine life right now.
This is the good stuff!
Great story, it made my day. Because it is well written it draws in the reader – heart, mind, and soul then explodes with the twist.
Great job setting the scene and building the tension. The plot twist was perfect. Thank you for a light-hearted read during these stressful times. We need more of this.
Thank you so much!
Yes, I really like this one. You wonder what sleazy or dishonest thing she is about to do, then she picks some not so healthy food up. Well done, much prefer this to murder etc.
very well doñe. Good twister ending.