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The Betrayal

March 29, 2019 6 Comments

The Betrayal

By Larry J. Maltin

You told me you’d save me. I trusted you. You kept reminding me with pop-ups that if the time should ever come, you would save me. You promised me.

Well, the time has come. I can’t do anything. The crash came with no warning. It was total and complete. Now, here I sit and wait for you to fulfill your promise. Instead, all you do is demand “Enter your password to start the recovery of your disk.”

What password?? Why can’t things be simple, like they used to be? I never needed a password to recover a paper from my wastebasket.

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  1. June Rogers says

    March 29, 2019 at 2:28 pm

    Good one! Nice build up and delivery!

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  2. cascondaville says

    March 29, 2019 at 2:45 pm

    Yep! Promises! Promises! Nice story.

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  3. diannemoritz says

    March 29, 2019 at 6:03 pm

    exactly! everything is so complicated and impersonal today.

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  4. Philip Scholz says

    March 30, 2019 at 2:59 pm

    I was so happy to see your name on this. It’s so cool (and so true.) Well done.

    Reply
  5. Barry Krivisky says

    March 31, 2019 at 10:09 am

    Suspense and nostalgia in 101 words. Well done!

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  6. Nan says

    April 7, 2019 at 4:50 pm

    Very clever.

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