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The Big Crunch

August 10, 2015 2 Comments

The Big Crunch

By Daniel Finkel

The beast scrabbled at the one-dimensional walls of its pinprick prison, its unformed mouth keening, desperate to escape the heat, the pressure, the smallness, until finally the subatomic structure cracked and fell and the beast was free, expanding out of nothing into nothing with sharp gases scintillating in its stomach, galaxies unfolding like beach umbrellas, and stars forming and flaring and dying like macrocosmic clockwork, until at last the fabric of eternity is stretched too thin and the beast collapses back into its molecular egg, where it sleeps for a time, with the memory of solar systems circulating in its bloodstream.

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  1. clayfulghum says

    August 10, 2015 at 1:00 pm

    Never has the Big Bang been described so perspicaciously. Superbly imaginative metaphor.

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  2. TISA GARRISON says

    August 11, 2015 at 11:46 pm

    Hawking-esque dystopian metaphor…in 101 words…bravo.

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