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The Birds

August 5, 2015 6 Comments

The Birds

By Prospero Dae

I repaired a birdhouse and built two new ones (with modern plumbing and art deco furniture). I was obviously going to have to up the rent. That’s when the nightmares started. I was a school teacher in a small town and was being watched by crows. It all seemed familiar. Finally, as the birdhouses became vacant, I took them down and burned them in a pyre.

Months later I was fighting with my insurance adjuster over the drapes in my home. The fire might have been revenge, but my insurance company was decidedly crueler than an aggrieved bird could ever be!

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  1. Cynthia Jobin says

    August 5, 2015 at 12:44 pm

    Obviously the insurance company did not want to settle because the adjuster found the butt of a stogie near the windows where the curtains hung… probably left there on purpose by Jim Crow (Disney’s cigar-smoking corvus) to get even, and incriminate you.

    So many possibilities left pending, in this story, which is perhaps what makes it a most interesting story.

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  2. Marchell says

    August 5, 2015 at 9:46 am

    Wow! A very short and a very unique story, I hope to read more stories by this author.

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  3. Mary says

    August 5, 2015 at 11:41 am

    Yeah I echo Marchell reaction, wow Prospero!

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  4. milliethom says

    August 5, 2015 at 12:34 pm

    Definitely a very unique story, Prospero, and so well written.

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  5. exiledprospero says

    August 5, 2015 at 2:44 pm

    But I thought you, dear Cynthia, would have been all over Hitchcock with this one. The birds, the eponymous villains from the movie, were inexplicable, heightening the sense of horror (though not for me, naturally). But you have to admit, insurance adjusters are pretty scary in so far as they are rude and inexplicable.

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    • Cynthia Jobin says

      August 5, 2015 at 3:26 pm

      Insurance adjusters…bah…not only can they be rude, they are altogether too explicable. I saw “The Birds” in a local cinema when it first came out. As with most Hitchcock films (except for “Psycho”) it crossed a line that, for me, put it away from fright and into the ridiculous. So I did not tremble, I laughed. Sometimes inexplicability is maddening, sometimes frightening, and sometimes just plain droll. I seem forced to live— and have come to love— a certain amount of inexplicability. Which is why I love your stories.

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