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The Boatman

November 28, 2015 6 Comments

The Boatman

By Dan Purdue

Each night, we watch the boatman’s faltering progress towards the island. The light from his lantern flickers as winter storms whip the lake around us into a seething black sea.

While the wind howls down the chimney, we remember last summer—the hottest on record—and the day we’d walked out from the cottage, our sandals kicking up dust as we crossed the dry-baked bowl of the lake bed. Lifting the crumbling husk of a small wooden boat, we’d disturbed broken oars, a skull, the rusted remains of a lantern.

We hold each other close and hope the storm never ends.

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  1. Christina Butcher says

    November 28, 2015 at 2:49 pm

    Wow, beautiful writing

    Reply
    • Dan Purdue says

      November 30, 2015 at 3:12 am

      Thank you, Christina.

      Reply
  2. Patsy says

    November 30, 2015 at 3:55 am

    *shivers*

    Reply
  3. Diane Allison says

    December 1, 2015 at 12:31 am

    Powerful imagery really helps to create the atmosphere of both the summer and winter scenes.

    Reply
  4. Bobby Warner says

    December 12, 2015 at 10:06 pm

    A nice weird tale. Great imagery and suspenseful writing.

    Reply
  5. islandmoonrise says

    January 12, 2016 at 7:41 am

    I like the sense of timelessness, and a hint of the dystopian. I’d like to put a link on my twitter page, if that’s OK – I’m a great fan of excellent drabbles. JD

    Reply

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