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The Body and Mind

June 13, 2020 4 Comments

The Body and Mind

By Leah Myree

I hear her coming closer. Breath. No. Quiet. Stop. A splinter from the jagged wooden door and I stifle a sound. If she knows I’m here she’ll become me. I’ll become her. She turns, I can see the whites of her eyes. Next second I am there and sickly black smoke slips past my lips. She goes to church and smiles and I see everyone smile back. Hands on her broken twisted back and they talk so much they don’t notice the slurred tongue and incoherent sentences. I breath. Can’t think. Be quiet. Just stop. Wait. Blank eyes. Slip out. Hide.

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  1. stella gaucher murovic says

    June 13, 2020 at 9:53 am

    do u mean slurred “speech”? do u mean “Breathe” rather than breath?

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  2. Miera says

    June 13, 2020 at 12:39 pm

    Editorial comment: breathe (verb).

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  3. janetwr says

    June 13, 2020 at 2:05 pm

    Please give me some clues. Maybe there are some cultural references I missed.

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  4. Shoshauna says

    June 13, 2020 at 4:46 pm

    I can’t make heads or tails out of this one.

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