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The Breach

May 12, 2017 14 Comments

The Breach

By Susan Gale Wickes

I may have grown up poor but I learned, even at an early age, that certain things are worthy of collecting. I always kept a jar of hope, a box of inspiration, and a pocketful of faith.

Then the unthinkable happened. I came home one night and it was all gone. In a moment of weakness, I’d apparently let despair, discouragement, and doubt slip in.

Of course, I filed a report. I had to be honest. When they asked if I knew who might be responsible, I hesitated for a moment. Thank God I still had my courage.

“It was me.”

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  1. Irene says

    May 12, 2017 at 4:51 am

    A lovely little reminder that how we perceive the world really depends on the type of lenses we wear.

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    • Susan says

      May 12, 2017 at 5:08 am

      Indeed. I remind myself of this daily.

      Reply
  2. Jack Spies says

    May 12, 2017 at 5:06 am

    What a nice little allegory, Susan. I liked it.

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    • Susan says

      May 12, 2017 at 5:09 am

      Thank you, Jack.

      Reply
  3. Ariffa says

    May 12, 2017 at 6:00 am

    Excellent story, Susan! I really enjoyed it!

    Reply
    • Susan says

      May 12, 2017 at 6:15 am

      Thanks, Ariffa.

      Reply
  4. Swarn Gill says

    May 12, 2017 at 7:22 am

    They don’t allow poetry…but somehow you found a way to do it. Beautiful!

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    • Susan says

      May 12, 2017 at 8:50 am

      I feel so devious. Thank you!

      Reply
  5. Meghashri says

    May 12, 2017 at 8:14 am

    Amazing!

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    • Susan says

      May 12, 2017 at 8:51 am

      Thank you!

      Reply
  6. Caroline says

    May 13, 2017 at 7:47 am

    I loved this Susan…

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    • Susan says

      May 13, 2017 at 8:10 am

      Thank you, Caroline!

      Reply
  7. Bobby Warner says

    May 13, 2017 at 9:24 am

    This story is primarily a tell now show story, but it was nevertheless a very good one. Nice, heartwarming message!

    Reply
    • Susan says

      May 13, 2017 at 3:27 pm

      Thanks, Bobby!

      Reply

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