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The Caterpillar Jar

January 29, 2020 8 Comments

The Caterpillar Jar

By Charlotte Oakley

Alec liked collecting caterpillars. Not much made Alec happy, but caterpillars did.

The way their bodies moved—gentle waves across soft backs. He liked how their tiny feet tickled his palm.

Alec had a special jar for them to live in, with holes in the lid for air. Each morning, he placed fresh leaves inside to ensure they ate well.

One day, the caterpillars vanished, leaving behind strange brown pods. Alec just stood there, palms sweaty and body shaking. Nothing could console him.

All he could do was hope they’d reappear.

Days later, they did; as the most beautiful rainbow butterflies.

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Comments

  1. Rosemary Reader and Writer says

    January 29, 2020 at 7:23 am

    Lovely. Excellent story for small children, to be read aloud perhaps.

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  2. b. says

    January 29, 2020 at 11:23 am

    Great story. One door closes and another opens…

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  3. Karisa Moore says

    January 29, 2020 at 1:41 pm

    Beautiful. Transitions are difficult, there is comfort in holding onto the caterpillar in our lives. Alec learned there is great beauty in letting go and discovering butterflies emerge. Thank you!

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  4. Derek McMillan says

    January 29, 2020 at 2:40 pm

    I enjoyed reading this.

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  5. Archie Iyer says

    January 30, 2020 at 12:01 am

    Sweet..innocent..fresh..

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  6. Mary E Falkner says

    January 30, 2020 at 1:52 am

    Simple, gorgeous.

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  7. Meghashri says

    January 30, 2020 at 11:11 am

    Beautiful!

    Reply
  8. elisha goss says

    February 2, 2020 at 3:59 pm

    Lovely

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