By Gordon Eggener
He’d been in there a half hour now, grunting and groaning. I pounded on the door again.
“Please go away. I’m changing in here!”
Bullshit! He hadn’t even brought any merchandise in with him!
“Sir, I’m calling the police.”
That seemed to do the trick. The lock clicked. The door creaked open.
Long fingers wrapped around the frame. There was a puff of fetid breath, a flash of yellow eyes. And the fur. So much fur.
Saliva dripped off wicked fangs into the carpet below.
I can admit when I’m wrong. It looked like he’d been changing in there after all.
Funny! The woods were not available? Well done tale. 🙂
A fun-paranormal turn of phrase! I’d read the next chapter.
Really like how the creature is left to reader interpretation, very fun
Fantastic 🙂 I bet the writer had fun penning this. There are shades of the Eighties film Teenwolf in here, only this would make for more entertaining viewing!
This is such a delightful short. It’s witty, spooky, and so funny. I love the writing style too.
Nice twist. I didn’t see that coming… nice!
Fun twist.
Ha! The last line is a killer!
Very fun!! I want to know what happens next. Well done!
Good one! Thank you!
Thanks for the laugh!