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The Crush

April 21, 2015 9 Comments

The Crush by Firdaus Parvez

By Firdaus Parvez

Raju was fifteen, and in love with Jennifer madam. She had come to help her mother run the orphanage.

He knew she liked him too. He remembered how she had held his hand and cried when five year old Pinky had died of typhoid.

Now, clutching a white rose, oiled hair slicked back and wearing his best shirt, Raju entered her office.

He saw her and smiled.

Then, he saw the young man standing beside her desk.

“This is my husband, Steve.” she explained.

Raju felt the sting of tears. Damn! There was a thorn on the stem and it hurt!

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Comments

  1. Mir nusrat ali parvez says

    April 21, 2015 at 6:41 am

    Good writting keep it up i am sure you can write all the best. Like your story

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  2. positivethoughts1 says

    April 21, 2015 at 7:02 am

    Aww thankyou! I’m so glad you liked it!

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  3. Tricia De Jesus (@PhynneBelle) says

    April 21, 2015 at 8:50 am

    Ah! The ecstasy of first love and the sting of rejection. You have tread beautifully through your tale, nodding at reminiscence.

    Reply
  4. sagedanish says

    April 21, 2015 at 8:53 am

    Wonderfully written baji 🙂

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  5. Rebecca says

    April 21, 2015 at 10:16 am

    Lovely, sweet story about youth, love and loss. Beautifully written Firdaus.

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  6. Firdaus Parvez says

    April 21, 2015 at 10:45 am

    Thankyou Phynne, Danish and Rebecca for your lovely comments. I’m so glad you liked it. (Sorry I’m having trouble replying you individually.)

    Reply
  7. bunmioke says

    April 22, 2015 at 4:37 am

    Beautifully inked and quite relatable. God job.

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    • bunmioke says

      April 22, 2015 at 4:37 am

      *Good.

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  8. Firdaus Parvez says

    April 22, 2015 at 5:40 am

    Thankyou bunmioke. I’m glad you liked it.

    Reply

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