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The Decision

July 22, 2020 8 Comments

The Decision

By Peggy Gerber

Carmen stumbled on something in the backyard while serving Mrs. Davenport her tea, wondering, What was that?

She looked down but didn’t hear the rattle until it was too late. The snake bit them both. Terrified, Carmen called 911, consoling Mrs. Davenport until the ambulance approached.

Dr. Allison Williams was on duty at the hospital when the women arrived. With enough anti-venom for only one patient, she phoned the hospital administrator for a decision. He told her, in no uncertain terms, “Save the one who has insurance.”

Dr. Williams kissed her job good-bye as she injected the anti-venom into Carmen’s arm.

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  1. Kelly Louisa Balliu says

    July 22, 2020 at 7:39 am

    That’s brilliant.

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  2. ren says

    July 22, 2020 at 7:49 am

    well done!

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  3. janetwr says

    July 22, 2020 at 9:43 am

    So much said in so few words. Powerful story and, unfortunately, so true. A difficult time to be a medical professional.

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  4. derekmcmillan1951 says

    July 22, 2020 at 4:12 pm

    I enjoyed this. I wonder if a National Health Service might be a good idea 🙂

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    • Caryn R Diuguid says

      July 23, 2020 at 8:36 pm

      Tough choices that need to be made when no one wants to have that responsibility. Brave and relevant, Peggy!

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  5. Marie Johnson-Ladson says

    July 22, 2020 at 7:02 pm

    Great story!

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  6. eunice Pruitt says

    July 22, 2020 at 8:40 pm

    Great commentary o nsociety and character,

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  7. Ellie A says

    July 22, 2020 at 10:12 pm

    Clever story ? with a social punch to it.

    Reply

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