A beautiful demon sat at a cafe, sipping her soy-latte. A handsome stranger with a dishonest face sat beside her. He fell in love with her and confided every sin he committed: abusing women, abandoning his children, stealing clients’ life savings. He sometimes caught glimmers of her true ugly demon form, but he didn’t care. No one loved him as she did. When the Demon knew she won his undying devotion, she spat at him, screaming he deserved death not love. She laughed when he swallowed the bottle of pills in his despair, then collected her reward from the Evil One.
Right, who’s going to be the first to say, “sounds like my ex”?
Really enjoyed this. Loved the simple but effective ‘beautiful’ and ‘handsome’. Alphas get what they deserve.
Hey, Jackie,
You reap what you sow! Congrats
Adelaide
Perhaps those in thrall to demons boast of their wrongdoing rather than confessing. I liked this story, it made me think.
I’d love to know what reward was bestowed by the Evil One. Write a sequel.
Wow, you sure packed a lot of content into 101 words. Fantastic, I loved it. Congratulations!
A concise statement of a comeuppance situation. Gets better with every read. Good job!
Wow! That was amazing! Read through it a few times and it gets better and deeper with each read. Well done!
Congrats! I love the little details like the soy latte.
Thank you Robin