By Shydiamonds
He told me there was paradise behind the oak doors on the tenth floor of the under-construction building. I didn’t believe him because there were no oak doors in that building; why would there be? It was under construction.
He told me there was a sparkling waterfall behind those doors, with mermaids in it. I deemed him crazy.
He told me that the doors appeared anywhere on that floor, tried convincing me to go with him. I pushed him away.
He was found dead on the road the next day; people said he jumped.
I knew that he saw the doors.
Wonderful and powerful impact story. Loved that it’s precise but meaningful
Excellent 101 Word Story, Shydiamonds!
Thank you 🙂
Wow!
Glad you like it
A wonderful story. Very moving!
Thank you so much 🙂
Your story is a mix of tragedy and revelation. Tragedy in that we can be disconnected with each other in terms of not sharing visions and thus contributing to a suicide. Revelation in that doors to other dimensions can appear without warning through undreamed conduits.
Your story is a mix of tragedy and revelation. Tragedy in that lack of shared vision contributed to a suicide, and revelation in that conduits to other dimensions can appear in the most unexpected places.
I really like your analysis , you understood it so well.
Thank you 🙂
loved this.
Brilliant!