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The Encounter

June 19, 2017 14 Comments

The Encounter

By James Dalton Byrd

I opened the cabinet and there she was. A large roach carrying an egg case. A mother doing what she must to ensure the survival of her offspring.

I sensed the visceral power of half a billion years of evolution, trial, and tenacity that surrounded her. She was representative of a lineage that made our own story pitiably puny and insignificant in comparison. She moved slowly, with an almost alien, ancient grace. I was humbled by it.

Her kind would be on this planet long after we have passed into unrecorded history, but not today. She did not survive the encounter.

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  1. Don L. Robishaw says

    June 19, 2017 at 5:56 am

    James,

    I knew what the punch line was going to be, but I still laughed.

    Thanks,

    Don

    Reply
    • James Byrd says

      June 21, 2017 at 5:25 pm

      Thank you

      Reply
  2. Dave Daniel says

    June 19, 2017 at 6:34 am

    James, this is a neat little biology lesson. He who laughs, lasts.

    Thanks,

    Dave

    Reply
    • James Byrd says

      June 21, 2017 at 5:25 pm

      Thanks, Dave

      Reply
  3. Chuck says

    June 19, 2017 at 10:28 am

    Cool, and true.

    Reply
    • James Byrd says

      June 21, 2017 at 5:26 pm

      ThanQ, Chuck

      Reply
  4. Irene says

    June 19, 2017 at 6:50 pm

    Well done!

    Reply
    • James Byrd says

      June 21, 2017 at 5:26 pm

      Thanks, Irene

      Reply
  5. JacciGoodingAuthor says

    June 20, 2017 at 1:39 am

    ooh – brutal!

    Reply
    • James Byrd says

      June 21, 2017 at 5:27 pm

      Thank you, Jacci

      Reply
  6. Leslie says

    June 20, 2017 at 7:58 pm

    They once were the bane of my existence. They defeated me. Now you’ve rendered them poetic. And historic. They win. Loved it!

    Reply
    • James Byrd says

      June 21, 2017 at 5:28 pm

      I appreciate that, Leslie.

      Reply
  7. Bobby Warner says

    June 21, 2017 at 8:18 am

    Very good writing, James. Great imagery…and a surprise ending…make this one a Winner!

    Reply
    • James Byrd says

      June 21, 2017 at 5:29 pm

      Thanks

      Reply

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