“It’s the kind of storm rain which came down every time I picked you up for an impromptu date.”
“Why are you being so nostalgic now?”
“It is this romantic weather.”
“Ah! Top 5 on your list.”
“List?”
“The list of excuses you use to contact me since we broke up.”
“There is no list! I was just thinking about you.”
“Our song on the radio, our favourite café, our birthdays, just passing by, and weather. Top 5.”
“Don’t do that! The rain brought back memories.”
“I have to go.” As she hung up, Ashley wished ‘our love’ was on the excuse list.
Nice story…and, so true.
Stripped to the core, what a beautiful and stinging seed.
Oh, I think “love” ws hiding somewhere in that list!
So true! Why do people miss the non-apparent things?
Nice story, love is on the list, just not in the first 101 words.
Last line caught me by surprise. Nice job, Seema!
I loved it all, but mostly, the hang up!