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The Final Expedition

March 31, 2016 7 Comments

The Final Expedition

By Rosanna Bates

The Great Wall of China snaked up and down the rugged mountains, disappearing into the dusty horizon. Russia, Europe, Africa, India, and both the Americas were now just beautiful memories of jungles, deserts, plains, and breathtaking peaks. I hoped the last leg of this journey would be the most spectacular. It did not disappoint.

I unzipped my rucksack and pulled out Gina’s urn, placing it on a rocky turret. In this small corner of China, I fulfilled the vow I made to my teenage daughter only a day before the cancer took her.

“Here’s the world, Gina. Just like I promised.”

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  1. Thomas says

    March 31, 2016 at 9:21 am

    Very touching and beautifully done!

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  2. Bobby Warner says

    March 31, 2016 at 8:01 pm

    A BEAUTIFUL story. Enough said.

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  3. Bobby Warner says

    March 31, 2016 at 8:04 pm

    This one is a REAL WINNER! My thought after reading it: “Wish I had written that!”

    Reply
  4. Bobby Warner says

    March 31, 2016 at 8:06 pm

    Oops! This one was so darn good, I lost my head and commented twice! A thousand pardons.

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  5. Smila W Planete says

    April 1, 2016 at 1:19 pm

    Really lovely.

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  6. jfxmcl says

    April 2, 2016 at 2:10 pm

    Beautifully done … take a bow.

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  7. Jeremy Tummins says

    April 3, 2016 at 7:32 am

    Very nice.

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