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The Final High-Five

December 26, 2017 2 Comments

The Final High-Five

By Alice Penfold

When we high-fived tonight—before you left my bedside for the final time—I became ten again. I remember now; we never stopped until the slapping clap of our palms was perfect. Forever twinned together, as your hand touched mine.

Double trouble. That’s what Mr Clay said, in our primary days. I remember now. When we super-glued his seat, squeezed tomato ketchup into his coffee, scribbled hearts in permanent markers on his very white walls, he’d sigh, exasperated. Double trouble. We high-fived each time.

Until tonight, we hadn’t high-fived for fifteen years. Tonight, I felt that slapping clap more than ever.

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  1. Jeff Stone says

    December 26, 2017 at 4:42 pm

    Poignantly pregnant… the resulting questions could conceivably exceed the number of words. Well done!

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    • alicempen says

      December 28, 2017 at 8:34 pm

      Thanks Jeff. I really enjoyed writing this piece so your feedback means a lot!

      Reply

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