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The First Man

January 31, 2016 9 Comments

The First Man
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The first man—tall and good looking—had rescued the woman. Now they were engaged.

The woman—dramatically pretty and lithe of limb, once destitute, and marooned in this land—knew that men were men here as everywhere, and showed scandalous skin at the community pool.

The second man—taller and better looking— approached the woman as she stretched in the sun. He jiggled her big toe. Watching from a distance, the first man saw his fiancĂ©e smile warmly at the man.

The first man dove into the pool and held his breath well under, forestalling his inevitable surrender to fate.

By Jon Sindell

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  1. Tony Press says

    January 31, 2016 at 10:11 am

    Oh, the cycles, the circle “games” — good story.

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    • jonsindell says

      January 31, 2016 at 9:23 pm

      Thanks Tony.

      Reply
  2. Jeff Trott says

    January 31, 2016 at 11:29 am

    You succeeded in leaving us wanting…more!

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    • jonsindell says

      January 31, 2016 at 9:24 pm

      Thanks Jeff. Taking a break from novel-writing, so there will be more.

      Reply
  3. Bobby Warner says

    January 31, 2016 at 12:48 pm

    The ending makes me wish the guy had opted for “flight” instead of “flight,” yet this is all too often the way it goes.

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  4. Vesna McMaster says

    January 31, 2016 at 7:56 pm

    Yes, as per Bobby. Made it almost a surprise ending. Liked it.

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    • jonsindell says

      January 31, 2016 at 9:26 pm

      Thanks Vesna. It’s cool, that you guys are talking about it.

      Reply
  5. Paul Beckman says

    February 1, 2016 at 10:40 am

    Another good read, Jon.

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    • jonsindell says

      February 4, 2016 at 9:55 am

      Hi Paul, thank you.

      Reply

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