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The Gaoler

September 20, 2022 6 Comments

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From the blackest depths of his cell, Withered John, oldest of all, asked in croaking voice, “Jailer, are you new?”

Rats in the shadows scurried and scratched in the soiled and rotting straw on the cell’s floor. “Yes,” the jailer answered.

“What number are you?”

“I am thirty-fifth.”

“So, your name is also John. Will you be freeing me, Young John?”

“Oh, you will never be freed,” he replied.

“So, can I escape?”

“You could have always escaped. Like me. But now you are closer to free than I ever will be.”

Withered John confessed, “So I am…so I am.”

By M. Kelly Peach

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  1. yogita says

    September 21, 2022 at 4:19 am

    Very interesting. Had to read it twice, to feel the full impact..very powerful

    Reply
    • Michael Peach says

      October 1, 2022 at 7:03 pm

      Thank you.

      Reply
  2. Valli Henry-Boldini says

    September 21, 2022 at 9:25 am

    Interesting read… chapeau…

    Reply
    • Michael Peach says

      October 1, 2022 at 7:04 pm

      Appreciate it.

      Reply
  3. Laurel McHargue says

    September 21, 2022 at 9:54 am

    Poignant! The withered and the young, both longing for freedom.

    Reply
  4. Michael Peach says

    October 1, 2022 at 7:04 pm

    Yes. Thanks.

    Reply

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